The Poem of the Myriad Minds

[Paradoxymoron]

For our first game.

It is similar to those continued stories.


How to play the game:

I will start the poem by a single line, then the next poster will continue the poem by inserting his/her own line at the previous one. I will not indicate the setting or background so this poem can go anywhere. (I wish it will go somewhere.)

E.g.

Me: Her eyes devoured my world in an instant

Next poster: Her eyes devoured my world in an instant
And I didn't know where I would hide myself.

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Notes:

The next lines must be coherent, or related to the first line.

The tense of the verb must be consistent from the first line. Unless, the change is necessary.
The previous poster can reject the following line if it's not appropriate.

Consecutive posting is prohibited.

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Strict Rules:

►Rhyming scheme is A B A B. (instant, myself, want, help)

►Syllables: pentameter, 10 syllables per line.

►Limit: Never-ending.

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Let's see where this poem will lead us. Who knows, it might be an epic poem. So, I wil start this journey.



An old poet gazed at the horizon

[Paradoxymoron]

Ate Winter Rose - yep ganyan nga. pero kulang p po ng isang syllable ung line. hehe ^^,
Saka po ung tense ng verb dapat consistent. ^^,

[~:.Winter R0se.:~]

awww...sabi ko naman seyo terrible writer ako...hahaha
sige..salamat sa comment xD at pasensya ka na,kaze...

[Paradoxymoron]

aw ate..m di naman po sa ganun. hehe. Pakibasa na lang po ulit yung rules, o mahirap po syang gawin?
Pasensya k n ate, first game kasi ito na naisip namin.

hala bakit mo po dinelete? :c
dadagdagan n lang naman po un ng isang syllable e.

[Polaris]

an old poet gazed at the horizon
where he saw the forbidding eyes of god

[Paradoxymoron]

An old poet gazed at the horizon
Where he saw the forbidding eyes of God;
Suddenly the Truth became a fiction


Okay po b? pwede ko pang baguhin?